Comments on: Learning How To Write Good Sales Copy (Copywriting) http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/ Internet Marketing Blog Fri, 10 Feb 2012 01:02:06 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: haber http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/comment-page-1/#comment-47851 haber Wed, 23 Dec 2009 08:41:09 +0000 http://candy.become-a-blogger.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/#comment-47851 Hi, Yaro. It makes me want to go to the web site, and I’m not even explicitly targeting students. Then again, you did start to lose me about half way through. I agree with Brian that a strong opening paragraph setting expectations for a big payoff at the end would help. I’m still growing my marketing wings, and so there’s probably much more you can do that I haven’t thought of. I’ll be following this thread to learn more. -TimK good message Hi, Yaro. It makes me want to go to the web site, and I’m not even explicitly targeting students. Then again, you did start to lose me about half way through. I agree with Brian that a strong opening paragraph setting expectations for a big payoff at the end would help.

I’m still growing my marketing wings, and so there’s probably much more you can do that I haven’t thought of. I’ll be following this thread to learn more.

-TimK

good message

]]> By: Book Reports http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/comment-page-1/#comment-32630 Book Reports Thu, 04 Dec 2008 02:47:32 +0000 http://candy.become-a-blogger.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/#comment-32630 I like the point on the 80/20 rule. Just by exerting less effort, you'll gain triple the positive results out of it. I like the point on the 80/20 rule. Just by exerting less effort, you’ll gain triple the positive results out of it.

]]> By: fun love test for a couple to take free http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/comment-page-1/#comment-26997 fun love test for a couple to take free Mon, 14 Jul 2008 17:07:56 +0000 http://candy.become-a-blogger.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/#comment-26997 <strong>fun love test for a couple to take free</strong> I am thinking of doing a blog, how many times a week do you think I should post? fun love test for a couple to take free

I am thinking of doing a blog, how many times a week do you think I should post?

]]> By: Matt Fenner http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/comment-page-1/#comment-2924 Matt Fenner Wed, 15 Feb 2006 13:05:20 +0000 http://candy.become-a-blogger.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/#comment-2924 Is this servace for real. It would be perfect for me when i do end up starting the business that i want to. (although it probably wont be for a long time) Is this servace for real. It would be perfect for me when i do end up starting the business that i want to.

(although it probably wont be for a long time)

]]> By: Business Opportunities Links | links for 2006-02-13 http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/comment-page-1/#comment-2923 Business Opportunities Links | links for 2006-02-13 Mon, 13 Feb 2006 15:08:17 +0000 http://candy.become-a-blogger.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/#comment-2923 [...] Learning How To Write Good Sales Copy (Copywriting) » Entrepreneur’s Journey - by Yaro Starak (tags: copywriting sales howto bizopblog yarostarak) [...] [...] Learning How To Write Good Sales Copy (Copywriting) » Entrepreneur’s Journey – by Yaro Starak (tags: copywriting sales howto bizopblog yarostarak) [...]

]]> By: Tim King http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/comment-page-1/#comment-2922 Tim King Fri, 10 Feb 2006 19:21:12 +0000 http://candy.become-a-blogger.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/#comment-2922 Hi, Yaro. It makes me want to go to the web site, and I'm not even explicitly targeting students. Then again, you did start to lose me about half way through. I agree with Brian that a strong opening paragraph setting expectations for a big payoff at the end would help. I'm still growing my marketing wings, and so there's probably much more you can do that I haven't thought of. I'll be following this thread to learn more. -TimK Hi, Yaro. It makes me want to go to the web site, and I’m not even explicitly targeting students. Then again, you did start to lose me about half way through. I agree with Brian that a strong opening paragraph setting expectations for a big payoff at the end would help.

I’m still growing my marketing wings, and so there’s probably much more you can do that I haven’t thought of. I’ll be following this thread to learn more.

-TimK

]]> By: Brian http://www.entrepreneurs-journey.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/comment-page-1/#comment-2921 Brian Fri, 10 Feb 2006 14:48:16 +0000 http://candy.become-a-blogger.com/358/learning-how-to-write-good-sales-copy-copywriting/#comment-2921 Hey Yaro... not bad. Here's a few things based on my experience that might take the piece to the next level. 1. Your headline should probably be a sub-head, and a short, powerful headline should be formulated that really grabs attention (so that they read the sub-head, and keep going). 2. I like the general structure and flow... I think you need a stong opening paragraph that makes a promise to the reader. What will they get out of reading this? Then dovetail straight into the 80/20 section. 3. Your call to action is to visit the site. It could be a bit stronger, without going over the top of course. But you did use that magic word "free," so that helps. I think a tad bit more enthusiasm about what you're hoping the reader will later do (visit the site) is warranted. Other than that, I think you're being a bit modest. If your blogging style is any indication, I think you "get" copywriting just fine. :) Hey Yaro… not bad. Here’s a few things based on my experience that might take the piece to the next level.

1. Your headline should probably be a sub-head, and a short, powerful headline should be formulated that really grabs attention (so that they read the sub-head, and keep going).

2. I like the general structure and flow… I think you need a stong opening paragraph that makes a promise to the reader. What will they get out of reading this? Then dovetail straight into the 80/20 section.

3. Your call to action is to visit the site. It could be a bit stronger, without going over the top of course. But you did use that magic word “free,” so that helps. I think a tad bit more enthusiasm about what you’re hoping the reader will later do (visit the site) is warranted.

Other than that, I think you’re being a bit modest. If your blogging style is any indication, I think you “get” copywriting just fine. :)

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